Character talk

Cinderstar

From Children of StarClan

Check Results - 14 April 2010

HISTORY: In the most recent moon of Tiger's Wrath, when Reedwhisker had been killed by a fox and after the patrol returned, he went hunting down by the north banks of the river, where he spotted a young dog fox. Acting with his instincts, he sized up the fox and charged, driving it from the Riverclan border and into the West Pastures. - This section is my only issue. Your average clan cat is going to weight around 7 pounds (they live hard, cruel lives and would be nowhere near the 15 pound average housecat). Foxes range from about 6 to 15 pounds. Seeing as this one was well fed and had killed lone cats before, he had to have been on the large end of the spectrum. One lone tom wasn't going to get rid of him. He'd need at least another warrior (I'll grant permission here for it to be Duckfeather, if you'd like. She'd have been a young warrior with something to prove at the time and it's nice to build IC Connections at this phase).

You know where questions should go.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 10:15, 14 April 2010 (CDT)