Al Clawpone
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 24 January 2010
APPEARANCE
- but don't be fooled - Powerplay. Of sorts
- but that only adds to his appearance - Borderline powerplay... Very very borderline. Mainly because you don't say with it adds, but do force other players to assume it adds something.
- The last feature are his amber eyes, sharp with the evidence of intelligence and wit but also swirls with what hints at the cruel, violent creature he is. - Consider this line carefully. Please describe WHAT you think leads to these impressions moreso than just claiming the traits.
HISTORY
- Please address the creation and foundation of the gang he's currently running with.