Cassidy/Archive 1
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24 Hour Deletion Warning - 16 July 2010
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Sorry for the delay. Hoping I'd do a little better on timing, but I went to the beach! Anyway, she's done now. ^^
- Seafur
Check Results - 22 July 2010
I apologize for the lag in this getting processed. I've been having one of those months ;)
PERSONALITY
- twoleggers - I wonder about the choice of words for a cat raised completely around people. In the end it's up to you, but it seemed like she's been raised in a way that she'd have words like "human" or "person".
- she actually doesn't have much of a temper - Almost a powerplay. You might want to consider the wording.
APPEARANCE
- A silverish gray across most of her body, Cassidy is mottled with messy stripes of dirty black. - Due to genetic requirements we need alot of clarity in the language used to describe a cat. Gray = Dilute. Black = Non-dilute. A cat cannot be both dilute and not dilute at the same time.
HISTORY
- she learned how to hunt mice when she was a wee five months old - This is actually a very late age to learn such things (I've never understood why the clans wait so long to start training). I suggest This link. As a "Farm Cat" I'd think her parents would be taking her hunting as soon as she was physically able, the way farm kids grow up helping parents with chores.
If you have any questions about anything, just drop me a line. Kitsufox Fox's Den 09:33, 22 July 2010 (CDT)