Cheshire/Archive 1
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 20 March 2009
PERSONALITY
- small bouts of wise insight - Wisedom is a matter of opinion, rendering this a very mild powerplay.
APPEARANCE
- Cheshire is, quite simply, a - The 'quite simply' throws me for some reason... I think it's because I don't think there's anything simple about describing the looks of any cat with white markings accurately... Not exactly a request for change, but more pointing out a place you might with to think about alterations to.
- is mainly black with white patches - Please describe the placement of the white patches.
- Cheshire has rather large ears and paws which seemingly have outgrown his body before he's even done growing. - At just over a year, he would be done growing. (Resource)
HISTORY
- it only fit even more due to his coloring - You may wish to clarify this more, as many will think 'orange tabby' when presented with the name Cheshire, rather than black-bicolor.
Nothing big in the decline, but if you have questions, you know where to reach me.