Foxbright

This adoption is closed. Provide a paragraph outlining why you feel you should be selected as the player for the character. Ensure that you include an affirmation that you will proceed to correct the character sheet as described in the 11 September 2008 check.

Check Results - 11 September 2008

Template

• {{Unborn}} template is missing (Needed for the System)
• {{Litter/details}} template is missing (Needed for Admin Convince)

Personality

• fluctuating between periods mania and intense depression & grips of frequent hypomania, anxiety, parinoia, and recession - There is no indication of where such serious mental conditions would have come from in the character's history. A complex combination like this in such a young individual seems unlikely and is completely unsupported by character history. The character is an infant. It would be one thing to develop the character into a state of mental instability over time... But being born this way, this extremely complex and diverse mental conditions is... Unrealistic.
• Length Issues - The personality is very very long without any sort of brief overview that focuses on anything save the mental conditions.
• ICA=ICC - Just noting that, if this is the sort of personality you go with in the long run, it could have consequences for your character's career. I know you know that, but I make a point of saying this anytime people select things that might have ICA=ICC related results.
• Powerplays - Please go over the whole thing for powerplays. There are a number of statements that push the edges of powerplaying by giving impressions rather than just traits.

Appearance

• The first thing noticed about Foxkit is perhaps his eyes - Powerplay. Well... Borderline. The wording is very suggestive of controlling someone's characters.

 Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 16:08, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

Deletion Warning - 21 Septmeber 2008

This is a warning to indicate that, due to lack of editing and no {{LOA}} filed by the player, this application will be deleted once 48 hours has lapsed. Please either resume editing, or file and LOA and make a note here. Thank you,  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 16:12, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

Adoption Offer from Kitsufox

I've decided to throw my own hat into the ring for this one (Meaning that I'll be stepping aside and letting Gorse or Willow run the adoption and decide who should get the character). Hawkpaw is never going to be a full warrior (That's never really been his path since I adopted him). And Rowankit will be leaving the nursery soon. And I don't have a RiverClanner anymore, given the choices made over the past few months as we moved the site. I have 5 open staff slots, so I have the space, and major RP time is opening up now that the Foamfighting season is closing and the site move is mostly done. I have no issues with what will amount to an almost head to toe re-do of the character sheet to correct everything that's wrong with it. ;) Who knows my standards better than me? I also know that Ashkit's player and I get along, and it's been ages since I have had a good face-to-face role play setup with Kazul. It would be fun, and it would help expand the crew I RP with frequently.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 15:03, 20 October 2008 (UTC)

Just making a point here, Kit - "I don't have a RiverClanner anymore": Foxkit is ThunderClan (half, but yeah).

And for the other folks - don't feel intimidated just because Kit made an offer. If your pitch is good, you'll be considered just as well.

 Willow  ^{Willow's Grove} at 18:33, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Sounds fine by me. No objections on my part, and certainly Kitsu is a good candidate for this kit. Gorse 06:45, 25 October 2008 (UTC)