Jun/Archive 1
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 13 January 2010
OVERALL: Spellcheck - Please give the character sheet a once-over for spelling. When I start noticing you know it needs improvement (my spelling is not something known for being perfect).
APPEARANCE
- Tabby or Not? - You mention tabby markings on his tail but not on his other points. He's either got to be all tabby or no tabby. (Primal tabby with it restricted to the joints is a ticked tabby thing only. This is according to knowlege I have already, if you can show me evidence (including pictures in context on thier original source pages) I will reconsider. PM me any evidence you have)