Navati/Archive 1
From Children of StarClan
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Check Results - 26 July 2010
I know this character was intended to be an NPC, but the more you write about an NPC the harder I have to be. NPCs have lighter requirements, but they must still meet everything but the length rules.
CHARACTER TYPE: Player Character - This character should have been made using the NPC creation channel, not the PC one. It should be a Non-Player Character.
PERSONALITY: She can be very stubborn and hot headed, but she can also be ver loving and understanding. It all depends on the day. - Powerplay.
APPEARANCE
- Navati's fur is a pattern of white splashes on a coal black background, one of her ears is white, giving her the appearance of wearing a hat. - I've never seen a cat with a white ear on a primarily black body. Please clarify the markings.
- Her paws are very dainty, looking like they were dipped into white chocolate. - Powerplay. Color alone will not evoke daintiness in all characters.
You know the drill well enough. Kitsufox Fox's Den 09:20, 26 July 2010 (CDT)
Check Results - 29 July 2010
PERSONALITY: She can be seen as very stubborn and hot headed, but she can also be ver loving and understanding. It all depends on the day. [2nd INCLUDE] - Powerplay.
APPEARANCE: Her paws are very dainty, looking like they were dipped into white chocolate. [2nd INCLUDE] - Powerplay. Color alone will not evoke daintiness in all characters.
Kitsufox Fox's Den 08:14, 29 July 2010 (CDT)
Check Results - 30 July 2010
PERSONALITY: She can be seen as very stubborn and hot headed, or loving and understanding. - You continue to control and limit the way other characters are permitted to view your character. Just because you give them options doesn't change the fact that it's powerplay.
Kitsufox Fox's Den 09:14, 30 July 2010 (CDT)
Check Results - 4 August 2010
PERSONALITY: She obviously detests - Obviousness is a matter of opinion. Very mild powerplay.