Nightfall

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Archive 1

Offer from Rockclaw

Adoption Status: Declined

I would like to adopt Nightfall, i think id be the best roleplayer for him.The reason i believe this is because i can relate to him.Heres an example of how good i can RP him:(I know its god-modding to make other characters do things,i wont do this in the actual rp,but this is just an example.Sorry for using Dustwing and Shardclaw)

Nightfall was out on patrol with Shardclaw and Dustwing Im so glad im out of camp, He thought which gives me an idea. He trails behind the two,neither of them looking back.Then,charges full force. Dustwing and Shardclaw turn around,and they see Nightfall behind them,simply following the two."Did you hear that?"Dustwing asked Nightfall.

"No." Nightfall replied calmly.

"Then try using those things on your head,they're called ears." Dustwing retorted sharply.Shardclaw and Dustwing try to continue the patrol

They dont suspect a thing Nightfall thinks,with a mischievious smile.He trails behind again,charges forward,then stops before Shardclaw and Dustwing can turn around.

"Ok this time I know I heard something!" Shardclaw exclaimed angrly.

"Yes,theres someone out here and i dont that thing's out here to give us a gift." Dustwing agreed.

"Alright,there is nothing out here.Can we please get going?" Shardclaw stares at his brother in half amazement that he cant hear it.Half frustration that the thing could go up behind him and say

"Im going to kill you now." and Nighfall wont even hear it.

They continue with the patrol.Nighfall thinks Now for the grand finale! He hides in the forest and secretly follows Shardclaw and Dustwing/He lets out a faint growl.Shardclaw begins to turn around and yells

"Alright Nightfall,there is no way you couldnt'v- What happened to Nightfall?"

"Dont know,the fool probably found a badger set and decided to take a nap in it." Dustwing queries sarcasticly.

Nightfall growls louder.

"What is that?" Dustwing asks fearfully.

Nightfall growls louder and closer

"Ok,if this thing wants to mess with us,we'll give it a fight it wont soon forget." Shardclaw shouts into the air as they get ready to fight to the death.

Nightfall sneaks away and goes on the opposite side that the two warriors are facing.He comes up behind Shardclaw and Dustwing and lets out his biggest loudest roar ever.

They both jump and turn around expecting to see a badger or a fox.But all they see is a laughing Nightfall.(Done)

Im tired so i think ill stop right there.Ill check up in the morning.Till then,bye! :)

Rockclaw 00:53, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm just going to clarify one detail: This is not RP. You've given me a story, rather than Role Play. In Role Play you only play characters that are yours. You did, however, illustrate your writing skill level. This application will be going to deliberation now, you should have a result in something like 24 to 48 hours (Possibly less, depending on when Gorse has time for a chat).  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 01:00, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Things have been discussed. Gorse and I have decided to send your adoption offer into the Easement proceedings. You'll need to fill in the blanks in the character sheet so that the history covers the period after it. You'll be using the general Character Creation method with the stipulation that what's already there needs to stay (wordings, ect can be changed to suit you, but the gist needs to remain). If you have questions, just drop me a line. You might wish to look up older RP on the old website (it's linked from the front page) in addition to looking on this site. Our game information includes details of plots and suchlike. Questions always welcomed by the staff. Best of luck!  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 20:09, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

It wont let me use it,it gives me a huge error page that says the page already exists.Rockclaw 04:07, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

You're not creating a new character page. You'll just be editing the existing one. You'll notice that I unlocked the page and transfered the character to your name and added the approvals template and a couple of other required things for this process. You'll just be editing the existing character and spiffing it up. Not making a new version of him.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 12:49, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok sorry i wasnt on for a while.Ive been getting in trouble with my parents.But now i can get on.Ill probable be updating the page everytime i find something.So dont give your final judgement until i say im done Rockclaw 12:24, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I simply don't weight in until you change the settings and request a check, so you have little to worry about.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 12:27, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Due to lack of progress by Rockclaw on this character's improvements, the approval on the adoption has been rescinded and the character has been returned to the adoption rolls.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 13:10, 17 September 2009 (UTC)