Oakclaw

This adoption is closed. Please provide a paragraph outlining why you feel you would be the best new player for this character. Eased Requirements: Be prepared to supply history information to fill in the large missing periods of the character's life.

Offer from Phishfood

Adoption Status: Withdrawn

<S>this adoption offer is being made under eased rules.
I like Oakclaw because of his attitude and history. I like his headstrong disposition (classic!) because it is very sassy and bossy. I like his history because it's dramatic and interesting. It's sad that his kits don't know their related to him and he is treated like an enemy by his kits clan. I hope I can adopt this cat because he is simply so awesome. Thank you!

This adoption offer has been withdrawn by the player.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 07:15, 9 September 2010 (CDT)</S>

Offer from Owlwing

Adoption Status: Accepted

This adoption offer is being made under eased rules.
I want to adopt Oakclaw for several reasons. One of those is the fact that if nobody adopts him, he'll die, which is such a pity, because he is such a good cat. He has a lot of stuff going on, he has three kits in another clan, and then there's his relationship with Rosestorm, and that Sagepelt knows. His personality is also becoming closer to the one I would have a good muse with. I hope I can adopt Oakclaw.

I dunno why you made the offer under eased because you didn't have to... But accepted as an eased adoption.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 10:21, 29 October 2010 (CDT)

Check Results - 5 November 2010

PERSONALITY: Discordant Rambling - I understand most of this isn't your fault, but right now the personality needs a serious edit. So far whenever a "Change" was made, it was made amendment style. The thing needs a good solid edit to reflect what he is. There's also a large amount of history included in the personality that should be edited out.

APPEARANCE: thick dark brown pelt & thin black slashes and dots - Black and brown are controlled by separate genes and cannot appear in the same coat. He's "Brown Tabby" in the sense of being black based, but you'll have to clarify and clean up the description.

HISTORY: Continuity - I believe that Rosestorm stopped seeing Oakclaw as soon as she discovered she was pregnant... And right now the history doesn't suggest that. I suggest double checking the exact order things happened.

If you have any issues or questions, just let me know.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 14:51, 5 November 2010 (CDT)

Check Results - 6 November 2010

PERSONALITY

• He is a smooth talker, quick of mind and wit, and knows when to deliver praise. - Powerplaying. Describe what gives these impressions rather than just claiming them.
• His closest campanion is his brother Blizzardfury - I ask that you take this out until after a player is found. It's simple best to wait and see who adopts him and what they decide to do with him at that time.

You're getting there!  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 15:17, 6 November 2010 (CDT)