Pablo/Archive 1

48 Hours to Deletion

This is a warning that your pending character will be deleted if work does not commence on it within 48 hours. Thank you,  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 18:46, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

This warning was lifted awhile ago, due to an edit.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 15:09, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Deletion Warning #2

Your character has been pending since December 11th without edits. If you do not resume editing within 48 hours it will be removed from the list.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 15:09, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Check Results - 5 January 2009

PERSONALITY

• He doesn’t get angry, choosing something more out of chivalry when it comes to defense. - I make a point of pointing out absolutes that a person might want to rethink before I let 'em go. Feel free to not alter this if you decide to stick with it, but understand that you are expected to play it.

APPEARANCE

• His eyes are big and bright, the color a brilliant bright green that change every moment with his expression - Unless he's got a color changing LED behind them, eyes simply don't alter in color.

HISTORY

• Pablo was born in the city - Please clarify the city. Currently the twoleg place that lies to the west isn't open to RP. The one to the east (Whitehart), is. Based on things said later, I think you have him born in the western twoleg place and then heading in the direction of Whitehart.
• At six moons, he snuck out of the den for a day and met the local kittypets and loners. & Before he could try to find him, however, his mother caught him and chastised him for running away from her. - By about 12 weeks a cat is ready to be completely on its own. Only Clan tradition holds kittens to their parents until 6 moons. Please explain why he was still so bound to his mother at this time, 3 moons beyond when she would have had to expend energy caring for him so heavily. Additionally, kittypet and loner are clan words. Why would a cat with no ties to the clans be thinking in them?
• They told him stories of his father that amazed the kit. - Kit? At 6 months he'd be both physically and (possibly) sexually mature.
• He spend moons with him - I think you intended spend to be spent.

 Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 18:58, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Check Results - 26 January 2009

Just a couple off little details left.

HISTORY

• Anita was a semi-kittypet - Kittypet is a clanner word, not used by non-clanners.
• a pair of Twolegs and in the Twolegs’ backyard and wandering the Twolegplace for a while - Another Clanner word.

 Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 16:36, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

Recovery Period - 18 thru 25 April 2010

Reply to this section with an explanation of the character having been overlooked in the activity check. Remember to sign your message with ~~~~.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 09:53, 18 April 2010 (CDT)

Personal reasons...death in the family (both sides, funerals that required traveling to...), school (AP exam studying, final exam studying, final projects, etc), work/volunteering. I simply...have no time. Within a month, however, I'll have unlimited free time...figures. The spring is always worst for me, always has been, and death didn't help. Heather 13:26, 25 April 2010 (CDT)