Rouge/Archive 1
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24-hour Deletion Warning (18 October 2009)
- Characters pending for more than a week without edits are subject to deletion. You have a 24 hour window in which making an edit will cancel this process. You may also request a move of your in progress character to your userspace (Simply post under this statement or PM the issuing admin with the request). Taking no action will result in the deletion of your pending character.
- Thank you, Kitsufox Fox's Den 15:28, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
Check Results - 22 October 2009
NAME HISTORY: Format - Please format it in line with the Described Conventions. While there are no explicit instructions for non-clan, it should be styled in line with the expectations for clan cats (of course with adjustments for the differences in the ways names are acquired between styles). Save the details for his history, and just give bullet points in the name history. Consult a few other non-clan characters for precedents.
APPEARANCE
- his whiskers are slightly shorter than those of most cats. - I worry about this statement due to it's absoluteness and all-inclusiveness. Because it defines the whisker length of the bulk of other characters in the game (Longer than this), I either need it altered to not directly make requirements of other characters, to see research that this statement can be considered correct based on other character sheets, or something of the like. If it is to be accepted as an absolute (and we have no established game-wide absolutes, just absolutes that reflect specific in game populations) I'll need to see proof that it's true.
HISTORY
- a bag of red soot - I've never heard of such a material, and know of nothing comparable. Please clarify what he fell into.
- When he was about 15 moons old he came across a place that wasn't he would stay at for quite a while. - What wasn't the place?
SIRE: Unknown - Even if he does not know the sire, it is not acceptable to enter Unknown. An actual name must be provided for future record keeping in relation to possible genealogical and genotyping undertakings.
Questions should be direct to Kitsufox.
Check Results - 27 October 2009
NAME HISTORY
- Format - None of the accepted conventions accepted involve a lack of sentences.
- Name before? - The history seems to imply that he must have been something before the moment when his mother decided to start calling him Rouge.
HISTORY
- When he was about 15 moons old he came across a place that wasn't he would stay at for quite a while. - [2nd INCLUDE] What wasn't the place?
Recovery
- Just had his first thread not too long ago. Would like him back please. 17:27, 16 January 2010 (CST)Blackheart
Recovery Period - 18 thru 25 April 2010
Reply to this section with an explanation of the character having been overlooked in the activity check. Remember to sign your message with ~~~~. Kitsufox Fox's Den 09:52, 18 April 2010 (CDT)
- My apologies. I was pretty inactive until just recently and so I hadn't really been on the site. Blackheart 23:04, 25 April 2010 (CDT)
Recovery Period - 13 thru 21 June 2010
| Please respond in accordance with the instructions given below prior to 21 June 2010 Please provide an explanation of why the activity check was missed with this character. Remember to follow your comment with ~~~~ |