Schatzi/Archive 1

Character Approvals - 9 December 2009

APPEARANCE

• Length - While technically meeting the 4 sentence mark the short, chopped nature of the entire thing leads me to have to call this for length. Non-clan cats are held to a higher grade that clan cats.

HISTORY

• Length - The requirements, as given in the creation form, require a minimum of 3 paragraphs.
• Born in a shelter to a rogue female - Rogue is a clan word. Unless you wish to explain why a cat of Clan Blood is in a shelter, I suggest using non-clan vernacular.

As always, any questions should be sent my way.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 12:13, 9 December 2009 (CST)

Recovery

I hadn't noticed nor knew that there was an activity check for non-clan cats, which is why I didn't respond to it. Now that I'm aware, I'll be sure to respond to future activity checks, and avoid making the same mistake twice. -sonix- 21:29, 9 January 2010 (CST)

Recovery bid accepted.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 21:58, 9 January 2010 (CST)