Sparrowtail
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 18 June 2010
I really do apologize for this taking so long. It was just one of those things that I kept needing to set aside again and again while I beat RL into submission.
PERSONALITY: rarely find him with out some kind of smile on his face, wether it be a small smirk of knowing or a joyful smile - Cats are unable to smile. They simply do not have those muscles. You'll have to find other gestures, more feline ones, to use to evoke happiness.
APPEARANCE
- forehead in a pattern of flames - Braided, or candleflame, tabby markings don't exist in cats. Please clarify the marking your going for.
- His pelt, being a firey red at the forehead in a pattern of flames, lightens as it goes towards his tail. - I have never run into references of such a phenomenon in a cat's coat. Typically the only way part of the coat is darker than the rest is through Pointed, Tonkinese, or Burmese patterns. Please investigate these patterns and clarify your description.
HISTORY
- purring and smiling even when - See above comment about smiling.
- During this time the Clans were at peace - This is just a comment, so you can disregard this if you'd like to. The "Peace" during the Markedkit prophecy was a shaky, delicate thing. The only thing making peace a reality was the very existence of the Markedkit and the word of the Medicine Cats in regards to the prophecy.
- His mother, being much younger than his father, survived the killingcough and still resides in the elder's den. - Be sure to offer her up for adoption in the Family Finder forum once the character is approved.
- Even though his clan has gone through some difficult times, he is one of the cats who tries to keep his clanmates' spirits lifted. He has no apprentice, but hopes that he may acquire one in the near future. Living his life for his clan and StarClan makes him very happy and he looks forward to what lies before him. - Just another comment ;) But he's happy in a time and lives for StarClan in a time when his leader is openly defying traditions like brining clanmates to gatherings?