Squallstrike

This adoption is closed. Please provide a paragraph outlining why you feel you should be selected as the new player for this character. Also include information on how you wish to develop this character. (EASEMENT: Be prepared to expand recent history and update appearance and personality sections to be more current.)

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Offer from Bedforddanes

Adoption Status: Accepted

This adoption offer is being made under eased rules. I believe I should be accepted to play Squallpaw because I could flesh out a character who has almost no personality slate to go off of and provide new IC storylines and contribute to the game. Squallpaw has plenty of IC family to build threads off of and the recent events in ThunderClan (i.e. Lostgaze's banishment, which he was present for as a kit) and Bloodstar's death could help me shape his personality into a young cat who would try to follow the warrior code and his family's legacy as strictly as his young paws can allow.

The Adoption is accepted, of course pending the requirements of the easement and the editing process.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 17:25, 26 March 2014 (CDT)

Check Results - 30 March 2014

Greetings and welcome to your first go-round in our applications department! Characters ususally go through 2-4 rounds of decline and editing, so do not feel discouraged about the fact that this was declined. CoSC has diffrent rules, and a diffrent approch to Warriors. The Apps process is where new players pick up a ton of these critical details.

In the decline itself I will take the section that I have change requests for and quote it, and then describe the needed changes. (Occasionally, it's just me commenting, but those situations that don't require change will be noted in the text). If you run into any questions, please feel welcome to contact me for clarifications.

APPEARANCE

• the fact that his ears are slightly larger than those of his sister's - Powerplay. You must have permission of other characters define traits about those characters (ear size). Please reach out to the players in question. If they approve, they simply need to kick me a PM so that I can file away their approval for the matter.

This is a stellar first showing! Kudos for all the research and really nailing the idea of what your job was with the easement process! If someone gave you hand, Kudos to them, too!  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 19:19, 30 March 2014 (CDT)

Approved 3 April 2013

I got the approval from Nagini, and thus all is well now.  Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 10:26, 3 April 2014 (CDT)