Thornberry/Archive 1

Check Results - 31 October 2009

PERSONALITY

• Overall - Currently, you talk mostly about what he likes and what he tries to be. There's very little focus on what he is. In fact, there's only one thing that he is that's mentioned, and it's not acctually a part of his personality, it's a physical trait (clumsiness).
• He's somewhat clumsy, as his paws are rather large. - This is a physical trait, not a personality one.

APPEARANCE

• his fur is short but slightly bushy - Please clarify the length of his fur. I'm unsure if he should be considered 'short' or 'mid length' fur.

HISTORY

• Rockfur became Thornpaw's mentor - It's extremely unusual for a parent to mentor their own kitten without a good reason.
• He didn't participate in any battles - Just bringing it up because it seems a weird statement to include when their haven't been any battles for RiverClan since the Moon of the Markedkit.

As always, send any questions my way.

 Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 14:40, 31 October 2009 (UTC)

Check Results - 1 November 2009

PERSONALITY

• He isn't easily riled up, trying to keep his cool in tough situations like when his mentor quizzes him. - At 27 moons he still considers being quizzed by his mentor to be a quality example of a 'tough situation'?

 Kitsufox  ^{Fox's Den} 18:37, 1 November 2009 (UTC)