Xochiquetzal/1
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 14 September 2009
PERSONALITY
- is a sweet tempered she cat with a loving heart - Powerplay. Remember that you can't decide how people interpret traits, only describe the various components of them. Since you don't provide any description as to what makes up her temperament this has to be a powerplay.
- Xochiquetzal is also a dreamer, she believes in fairy-tails and happy endings. - Powerplay. You cannot force others to see her delusions as being a 'dreamer'. Other players need to have the freedom to take her belief in fairy-tails and happy endings however they wish.
- Xochiquetzal is friendly, but can be a little shy when meeting new cats. - Powerplay. You're once again forcing others to see your character in a certain way when there are multiple ways a trait could be taken.
APPEARANCE
- Length - The minimum length for a domestic as outlined on the Expectations page have not been met.
- You really need to watch powerplaying. It seems to be your personal Kyrptonite where character sheets are concerned. If you have any questions about things, let me know.
Check Results - 18 September 2009
APPEARANCE
- Xochi has slightly darker fur than the rest of her coat on her back legs and hind paws. - I've never encountered a marking or pattern anything like this. You'll need to PM Me information in the form of pictures (in which the markings are obviously not an effect of the light) /including/ the pages they come from originally (so I know the context of the images) and (preferably) a link to genetic information on the pattern.
Check Results - 20 September 2009
APPEARANCE
- Xochi has a small white tip on the end of her tail that she has always called her 'dreamers mark'. - Because this is a grievous fault in an Abyssinian I would have to have a PM from Web indicating their willingness for such a fault to exist in their PC's line (It would involve a genetic change to one of the parents as white markings cannot be carried hidden).