Zephyr
From Children of StarClan
Check Results - 24 January 2010
PERSONALITY
- generally trying to stay away from other cats. She is an extreme introvert and prefers not to talk often, staring into space more often than not - Please consider how this effects the plot. She has to be a firm member of Clawpon's Gang.
- doesn’t like staying in one place for too long - Please consider plot implications. She has to care about taking a barn: A permanent home!
APPEARANCE
- She has a a black patch over her head and another on her back. In addition, both of her right toes are black. - Van cats almost never have white tails. To the point where it's a virtual impossibility (and the character we have approved who does is a genetic chimera, which is incredibly unusual).
- A small diagonal scar over her right eye give her the permanent appearence of being confused. - Mild powerplay. Please just describe the fact that it resembles and arched eyebrow and leave players to interpret for themselves.
HISTORY
- Please address how she came to be a member of Clawpon's Gang.
Check Results - 28 January 2010
APPEARANCE
- A small diagonal scar over her right eye alludes to an upraised eyebrow in confusion. - As an upraised eyebrown can mean more than confusion, deciding that everyone has to interpret it this way is a powerplay. One might with to additionally note that a cat unfamiliar with humans would simply see a scar, not a hint of an eyebrow and thus not see it referencing confusion on any level ;) The compairson to an eyebrown is acceptable, but deciding what it means to the interpreter is a powerplay.