Tigerdusk
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Check Results - 22 January 2009
PERSONALITY
- is a very energetic kit who is curious and adventurous. - A lot of the words in that sentence push the edges of powerplay. Please describe the traits rather than just claiming them.
- He is seems to be - Very weird wording.
Kitsufox Fox's Den 23:37, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
Check Results - 23 January 2009
PERSONALITY
- Temperment-wise, he seems to be pretty laid back and doesn't seem to show any of the temper or fiercebloodedness that seems to be common in his aunts. - With the statements of 'seems', there's a lot of powerplay here. There's just no room for interpreting 'laid back' or how the character seems to an individual.