Tawnyfur
From Children of StarClan
Idle Warning
- Just taking a moment to note that this one is sneaking up on a week without edits. Keep in mind that the {{Approvals}} template must read {{Approvals|check=Y}} for it come up on the list of characters that need checks. Kitsufox Fox's Den 15:57, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
- Oh, I'm sorry, Kitsu! I put 'check=Y' in the wrong place. -embarassment- And here I've been wondering why you weren't checking it. o.o' =Fernwhisker 18:32, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
- I'm so sorry about this, Kitsu. I feel so dumb after reading this over. I haven't had a character declined since...well, it's been awhile. I believe my last two characters went through without a ripple. I can't believe I would have written a character sheet like this after roughly two years of CoSC...I ought to have known better. I reworked the sheet entirely to be more fitting of an CoSC NPC character. Sorry about the trouble. =Fernwhisker 22:59, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
Check Results - 23 August 2008
Because of the detail provided, I have to be pretty complete and give it the sort of time I'd give a true character (as you're not just being vague, but rather specific in most cases)
- Status: Deceased is not a valid option. Dead is the accepted response.
- Personality
- a quiet, stubborn she-cat: Powerplaying, though subtle. Quiet and stubborn are rather subjective, so I'll need you to describe how the impression is given rather than just stating the impression.
- She was not the sort of cat who seemed likely to have kits, since she was so stoic and distant: Statement is so subjective that in making the generalization a powerplay is created.
- History
- Tawnyfur and her two brothers were born to Greengaze and Mudfoot: Application of names to the parents of NPCs is not generally accepted in the department of NPC Parents to prevent excessive additions to the used name list (And to use those names, they would have to be applied to the appropriate fields and have pages created).
- Tawnyfur's brothers never survived their apprenticeship; one was struck down at a Gathering for mouthing off to Fiercestar or ThunderClan: Fiercestar may have been impulsive and strong willed, but I don't think a mere apprentice mouthing off would bring him to killing at fourtrees. Now... days after the gathering, ambushing a lone hunter... that he might do.
- Full-blooded Siblings: At least a token (Nameless) mention of the two brothers, as they're mentioned in the history, must be made for family tree creation purposes.
Kitsufox Fox's Den 20:57, 23 August 2008 (UTC)